On my last elevator pitch it was suggested to me that I focus more on the put more of an emphasis on the customer benefits rather than the delivery companies. To accomplish that I tried to relate the product more to the customer by using a real world example that most people have experienced. There is still a lot to work on, but I feel that my delivery is improving slowly but surely.
Hi Sarah, I found this to be a very good elevator pitch, your best one so far. I liked you started with a relatable anecdote, regarding the Iphone delivery. You speak confidently and your ideas are delivered very smoothly. I like you specifically mention how your app will remedy the issue you brought up and how you focused on the benefits to the customer rather than delivery companies.
Hi Sarah,
ReplyDeleteI found this to be a very good elevator pitch, your best one so far. I liked you started with a relatable anecdote, regarding the Iphone delivery. You speak confidently and your ideas are delivered very smoothly. I like you specifically mention how your app will remedy the issue you brought up and how you focused on the benefits to the customer rather than delivery companies.
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